What recent news story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you?
In era of globalization, people encounter numerous news which may be either positive and make them happy or negative and bring a feeling of sorrow. Recently I read awesome news about the treatment of an incurable disease. From my perspective this news was a kind of the strike of gleam, which is shining in a dark room, for people who resent these sorts of illnesses.
There is no argue that brain is one of the chief part of human's body and even the slight kind of inflammation leads inevitable side effects. There is a kind of cancer which may emerge in a person's brain. Before recent treatment, there was not an appropriate method for vanishing, these tumor-like morsels. Therefore, patients could not live more than three years in the best position. These morsels appear in the different veins of the brain, which have to nourish the brain cells, and stop blood circulation. Hence, the cells, not only could not receive oxygen and glucose, but also could not turn out carbon dioxide which is harmful for the cells.
Recent research which was carried out by scientists discloses that, by using a specific method on the basis of the nano-bio science, the disappearance of these tumors is possible. Scientists used a hollow nano structures which are named "Liposome", and filled them by therapeutic drugs. Liposome was marked by special small fragments on its surface, which lead it to get match with just brain's cells. In the subsequent step, death of cancer cells by thrusting a liposome's drug into them is possible. Consequently, by injecting these nano structures to brain vessels, health of patient, who suffer from this kind of disease, is firmly possible.
To sum up, in the past decades, finding feasible and suitable treatment for this cancer seems to be impossible. But scientists prove that impossible is impossible.
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