Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make.
Is money a true indicator of the success of a business?
In what other ways could success in a business be measured?
Nowadays, business is famous very much and a lot of people are doing their own different types of business. According to some people, that by amount of money a businessmen is making we can find out either he/ she is having a successful business or not. In this essay I will discuss either it is true or not and will talk about some other ways of successful business.
To begin with, money is very important to start a well established business and for the maintaining of that business. It’s obvious that if a person is making enough amount of money, so we can assume that he/ she is a successful business and his business is successful.
Secondly, money is needed for the maintenance of a business and will always required for expansion of business for example, a businessman needs to invest money in other companies, and will make associates and in this way his/her business will expand.
However, money is not the only indicator on which we will measure the business of a person, there are a lot of other things which play a great in successful business, such as, qualified and cooperative staff members, proper and good contacts with costumers, advertisement of the products in market, quality of products etc and it will give a good result in the development of business.
In brief, we can judge someone’s success in business by money a person is making but still there are many other ways on which a successful business is identified. Because, there will be many people in business who will have a lot of money but still their business will not that much established.
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Essay evaluation report
I will discuss either it is true or not
I will discuss whether it is true or not
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flaws:
No. of Words: 277 while No. of Different Words: 124
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 277 350
No. of Characters: 1265 1500
No. of Different Words: 124 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.567 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.627 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.022 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.515 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.779 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.301 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a businessman' or simply 'businessmen'?
Suggestion: a businessman; businessmen
...to some people, that by amount of money a businessmen is making we can find out either he sh...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...smen is making we can find out either he she is having a successful business or n...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mount of money, so we can assume that he she is a successful business and his bus...
^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...intenance of a business and will always required for expansion of business for example, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'in brief', 'such as', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21935483871 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.141935483871 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870967741935 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0483870967742 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0548387096774 0.0437548338989 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132258064516 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78269339924 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0129032258065 0.0326793684256 39% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00322580645161 0.00163938923432 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.0838709677419 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.041935483871 0.021408717616 196% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0129032258065 0.011925033212 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1592.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74729241877 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314079422383 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231046931408 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198555956679 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12274368231 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78269339924 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.037074148 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472924187726 0.56093040696 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.992651084 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.7777777778 20.7743622355 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7624130536 49.517814964 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.888888889 127.492653851 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7743622355 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.814263465372 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 53.8824709186 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.56578947368 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.558717434121 0.332605444948 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195890535769 0.102741220458 191% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717161782583 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770366822686 0.534860350844 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136590000788 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288275122165 0.134430193775 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602764600424 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384229026712 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0615542605006 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364266558968 0.228012699653 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269956657541 0.058150111329 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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