The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,
industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Globalization has urged countries to compete with each other on limited resources. Nations try to establish their authorization, and influence the global interactions in a meaningful way that benefits them at most. Thus, monolithic unity among individual compatriots, in order to fulfill such goal, is mandatory. Cooperativeness is the most prominent characteristic which empowers a country to overcome various obstacles, and achieve its goals efficiently. Therefore, inspiring the young burgeoning figures to converge their personal efforts on a single national goal, and encouraging cooperation ins...
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