Leadership plays an important role in any field. Any leader in any field is chosen by the society or community or by members of a certain field. Today's youth has a strong knowledge and skills which helps to bring success in various fields. But some of them are successful only because of good leadership . The best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership is by bringing them a sense of cooperation and not competition.
In today's generation the young people are having a sense of competition in them , and this is because the environment of competition has forcefully made them to think that way .For example, Students who are taught from childhood that he should be best and he should always lead ahead from other students forces them to act like this.But in professional life ,when we are working with many people we should not bring competition within us , instead we should do it with cooperation.
Competition is not good for any body,there is always a loss of someone some way or the other. Even in government ,For example, Political leaders, their competition and conflicts among each other destroy the whole system and instead of bringing peace in the nation it is the apposite that happens every time. I agree sometimes competition is good if one political leader does some welfare to the society and if other does the same in competitive spirit, the there is not problem ,but in today's world this never happens.
As young generation is said to be the future of society, the society should prepare young people for leadership in government ,industry and various other fields by bringing a sense of cooperation and not competition. Because if there is cooperation, there is no fear of loss , and people will come together and work for the benefit of society.
A leader is one has to lead many people . If a leader fails to guide its members then there is no use of his leadership as it bring failure. It is very important to cooperatively work with its its team members as they are a part of the project and has some work contributed. A leader should encourage people even if they do a good job or no. By cooperation only things become simpler, Competition will bring nothing but failure. So the society should prepare young people by bringing in them sense of cooperation and not competition.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as for', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.137614678899 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825688073394 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504587155963 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0573394495413 0.0444667217837 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.137614678899 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0206422018349 0.0406280797675 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72197787332 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206422018349 0.030933414821 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.098623853211 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206422018349 0.0249443105267 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.0148568991511 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2336.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 408.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72549019608 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328431372549 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227941176471 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151960784314 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107843137255 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72197787332 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419117647059 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.4917704486 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.380412469 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.109588017 59.4972553346 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.411764706 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.380412469 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.7941176471 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.66355140187 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476076752267 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157026041059 0.123202303941 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0997617276881 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546019896956 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199978781471 0.149214159877 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194474778349 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120962790529 0.0892212321368 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361753579918 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0824295427729 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329458622258 0.275328986314 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071151890807 0.0653680567796 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.