People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Human is the most sensitive creature in this world, who easily gets influenced by external forces looming around. There are many factors that affect the behavior of people like the society they live in, their upbringing and many more to list. At the same time, it is an individual who has been gifted with the power of thinking. He is at full liberty of making a choice about his own behavior without coming under any pressure.
Thoughts are the driving agents of our behavior, and these thoughts spring from the surrounding atmosphere in which we live. As for instance, in many countries laws are enforced that restrict people to throw garbage any where except at a dedicated place. Now, this is something very positive for any society. Here, an external force comes into picture which not only compels people to behave in a dignified manner, but also helps them become responsible individuals.
Conversely, I also think that sometimes behavior of people is not at all influenced by any external force. For example, crime is a punishable offence in every country. Still, there is no nation where criminals don't exist. In spite of knowing that their actions can harm them to a considerable extent, people do commit crime. Such folks are undeterred by anything and are solely responsible for their behavior.
To conclude, behavior is the offspring of our thought process. Though thoughts are highly influenced by our surrounding nature, still it is an individual who is the sole owner of his behavior. We are the most intelligent species in this world and no power can restrict us from deciding our own course of action. It is just the situation that plays a pivotal role in the behavior of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...d that restrict people to throw garbage any where except at a dedicated place. Now, this ...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a dignified manner" with adverb for "dignified"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...which not only compels people to behave in a dignified manner, but also helps them become responsible...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216049382716 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.16975308642 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0586419753086 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0617283950617 0.0444667217837 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135802469136 0.12292977631 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0432098765432 0.0406280797675 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61829591027 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154320987654 0.030933414821 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101851851852 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00617283950617 0.0249443105267 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0277777777778 0.0148568991511 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1712.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 289.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92387543253 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36678200692 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266435986159 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193771626298 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117647058824 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61829591027 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.48968727796 120% => OK
Word variations: 63.3010927002 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.338850797 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.705882353 141.124799967 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 43.6435986159 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.36170212766 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308773645206 0.391690518653 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0710638842948 0.123202303941 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0598620354901 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472573978317 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0982742815969 0.149214159877 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111388886151 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059870703546 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277616996727 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00341462610776 0.0692045440612 5% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209830079858 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700062911915 0.0653680567796 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.