It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighbourhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It will really be very exciting if a new restaurant will be built in my neighbourhood. I will definitely support the plan. Some the reasons of why I will support are as follows.
Firstly, I am very fond of eating, so I will love to have a restaurant near to my home. It will help me in times when I will not feel like cooking. I can simply order dishes from the restaurant or go there and have it. Moreover, my mother is a working lady, so she remains busy whole day in her work, and in the evening after she returns, she is too tired to prepare some snacks. So, in such cases, we can go and eat in our neighbourhood restaurant.
Again, the type of restaurant will also matter a lot. If it is not a good restaurant, then definitely there will be no profit in having a restaurant built near to my home. However, having a good restaurant near my home will also make it convenient for me to spend times with my friends. As everytime our home is not a good place to gossip as it may sometimes disturb our parents.
Sometimes, having a restaurant very near to our house may have some negative aspects. For examples, if the restaurant is a very famous one, then definitely it will attract a large number of customers every single day. During such situation, streets will be filled with customers vehicles which will really be very inconvenient for local people in the society.
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| 2016-10-05 | Geetanjali Das | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s it may sometimes disturb our parents. Sometimes, having a restaurant very near...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...us one, then definitely it will attract a large number of customers every single day. During such...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.176056338028 0.229887763892 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.144366197183 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0633802816901 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0915492957746 0.046263068375 198% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.105633802817 0.0685040099705 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116197183099 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0281690140845 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64291429486 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246478873239 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.080985915493 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0598591549296 0.0209618222197 286% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0105633802817 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1382.0 2387.08602151 58% => OK
No of words: 254.0 408.028673835 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44094488189 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267716535433 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192913385827 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145669291339 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0984251968504 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64291429486 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515748031496 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 49.0243057612 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9333333333 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.971988791 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 36.224671916 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 0.938144329897 1.45489161554 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1986332457 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126618824973 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0980689856247 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520067015259 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119991727642 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878131588236 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456774822072 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294612543598 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0344091555021 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144263229694 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527618259151 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.