Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way?
Over population is a great concern for many under-developed countries and the government takes many steps to control the uncontrolled increase of population. In many countries, government impose rules to restrict the number of children a family can have and also restricts many facilities in case a family has too many children. But imposing a tax to restrict the number of children in a family is not a feasible solution. In my opinion, other ways of controlling the population in a country should be considered rather than imposing the tax.
First of all, the population is the main problem in most of the third world countries whereas the developed countries mostly have control over that issue. In countries like china, the population is not a burden rather they have been able to use the large population as the main workforce for the steady improvement of the country. Overpopulation in an under-developed country directly related to poverty, illiteracy, unhygienic lifestyle and crime. So controlling the population in these countries is a must and imposing a tax on the poor people would not be a good idea. The trends show that educated upper class and middle class do not take more than two children in these countries where the poor people seems like have no control on that. If the government imposes the tax on those poor people, their life would become more miserable.
I completely agree that each government should maintain some policies and should impose strict rules to control the population a country has but increasing awareness and implementing other policies than tax imposing would be better solutions.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the government of a country should take any initiative to control the over population growth but tax imposing to poor people is the least effective solution since there are many alternatives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264615384615 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.144615384615 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113846153846 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461538461538 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0153846153846 0.0437548338989 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113846153846 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0338461538462 0.0403226058552 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94750998361 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246153846154 0.0326793684256 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147692307692 0.0861772015684 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0276923076923 0.021408717616 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00307692307692 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1866.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11803278689 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370491803279 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27868852459 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229508196721 0.203846283523 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160655737705 0.137316102897 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94750998361 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.808011372 60.7387585426 77% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4166666667 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1967411068 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 127.492653851 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.2855191257 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482559190308 0.332605444948 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.203977648922 0.102741220458 199% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108038882974 0.0668466124924 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646353611969 0.534860350844 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204833306382 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23294822038 0.134430193775 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767642783199 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323914901709 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.124264101255 0.0638462369009 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333589046709 0.228012699653 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106823837967 0.058150111329 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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