The lecture cast doubt on
First, the reading passage says that companies are acretiated because of being meeting echological standards but since too much advertisement is available to the costumors, they do not pay attention to advertisement and the lecturer says that the companies may gain confidence because of it.
Second, the reading passage said the price is different when the product is echological but the lecturer refuses by saying that for costumors price may be important if it is much higher or lower but if the certified wood is 5 percent higher the customers will pay.
Third, the reading passage is talking about American wood companies and how it can be sold around the world however the lecturer states that USA wood company is for American customer only.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 129 250
Minimum 150 words wanted. Need an introduction paragraph.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 12
No. of Words: 129 250
No. of Characters: 636 1200
No. of Different Words: 77 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.37 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.93 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.754 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.515 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advertisement and the lecturer says that the companies may gain confidence becaus...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264705882353 0.261695866417 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.191176470588 0.158904122519 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955882352941 0.0723426182421 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0294117647059 0.0435111971325 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0277247811725 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.128828473217 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0441176470588 0.0370669169778 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68208092336 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0147058823529 0.0208969081088 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102941176471 0.128158765124 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0294117647059 0.0158828679856 185% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0114777025283 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 781.0 1645.83664459 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 271.125827815 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05426356589 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 4.04852973271 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372093023256 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317829457364 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186046511628 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139534883721 0.113142543107 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68208092336 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 145.348785872 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.539623497131 113% => OK
Word variations: 50.5546922197 53.8517498576 94% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0529801325 23% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.7502111507 198% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4813933579 49.3711431718 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 260.333333333 132.220823453 197% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 21.7502111507 198% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 0.878197800319 342% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 74.7829457364 50.5018328374 148% => OK
Elegance: 1.73529411765 1.90840788429 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453906885034 0.549887131256 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.328590312479 0.142949733639 230% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.00421571681013 0.0787303798458 5% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.631733273073 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.75541673429e-16 0.139662658121 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.337889445284 0.266732575781 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404346838217 0.103435571967 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284305398206 0.414875509568 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11696070811 0.0530846634433 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276245433873 0.40443939384 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111940327785 0.0528353158467 212% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 10.2958057395 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.