When it comes to happiness and content, people in general believe that a healthy body along with a well-paid job creates satisfaction. On the other hand, quite a few people argue that it is impossible to maintain in a healthy condition and have a satisfying job at the same time. Although several inventions make lives more convenient than before, people today actually have stressful lives.
Standing out from others becomes more challenging than the past. 50 years ago, since the human population is controlled by worldwide wars, people can find at least one job as long as they are willing to work hard. However, the global employment crisis along with the pressure of population explosion creates the barriers for people to stand out from thousands of talents. Therefore, competitions move from domestic to international and lead to unbearable stress.
Certainly, technology makes lives more convenient; however, it also causes problems. The invention of vehicles brings about lethal problems and pollutes the environment. People's lives are taken away due to countless car accidents daily. Moreover, the exhausts, which are emitted by driving cars, not only cause human allergy but also deteriorates the global warming. Thus, people today live in a rather harmful world than 50 years ago.
Health problems are also common nowadays. Since cooking at home is time-consuming, eating outside becomes a trend recently. However, the foods, which are served in restaurants usually, contain high calories or the ingredients are not fresh enough. Besides, we do not fully understand the consequences of consuming genetically modified foods. As a result, healthy diet is hard to maintain.
Nowadays, people are under all kinds of pressures. It is more difficult to stand out from others than before. In addition, some inventions and foods post threats to our lives. Accordingly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'at least', 'in addition', 'in general', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224089635854 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.148459383754 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106442577031 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.112044817927 0.046263068375 242% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0224089635854 0.0685040099705 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114845938375 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0280112044818 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7843225938 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280112044818 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00840336134454 0.00188951952338 445% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700280112045 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00280112044818 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00840336134454 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1965.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 313.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27795527157 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389776357827 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303514376997 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223642172524 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156549520767 0.112833075102 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7843225938 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.524397521467 119% => OK
Word variations: 72.612467924 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.9047619048 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7378912491 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 45.2561996044 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.29702970297 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397118009506 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0486222384417 0.103427244359 47% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608684893871 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.435118228097 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122967631984 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116993897822 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108828131915 0.0781384742642 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.21443838843 0.336927656856 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0297019368321 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243680383715 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863884333982 0.0618886996521 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.