Both reading passage and listening are discussing Coliert memoir.The ecturer is supporting the eading and its accuracy about choveliet.
First, the lecturer is approving he was rich and asked for loan when he was in Switzerland. The reason for it was because he needed time to convert his asset to money and meanwhile he needed money. He borrowed on that occasion, although Critics thus argue that if the Chevalier had really been very rich, he would not have needed to borrow money.
Moreover, he had conversation wth memorier and everyone that witnessed those events said he had reports from them every night.However, critics complain that the memoir cannot possibly capture these conversations accurately, because it was written many years after the conversations occurred.
Furthermore. his escape from prison was true because soon after his escape they had to repair the ceiling. Although many rich people were with him that have more support he was the one who escaped. the other hand, reading passage states that the Chevalier had a number of politically well-connected friends in Venice who could have offered a bribe.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Both reading passage and listening are discussing Coliert memoir.The ecturer is supporting the eading and its accuracy about choveliet.
Error: ecturer Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: eading Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, he had conversation wth memorier and everyone that witnessed those events said he had reports from them every night.However, critics complain that the memoir cannot possibly capture these conversations accurately, because it was written many years after the conversations occurred.
Error: memorier Suggestion: memories
Error: wth Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 184 250 //need more content on lecture
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 7 12
No. of Words: 184 250
No. of Characters: 924 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.022 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.539 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.982 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.463 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.776 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.288 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...listening are discussing Coliert memoir.The ecturer is supporting the eading and it...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...id he had reports from them every night.However, critics complain that the memoir canno...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rs after the conversations occurred. Furthermore. his escape from prison was true becaus...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
...conversations occurred. Furthermore. his escape from prison was true because soo...
^^^
Line 8, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon after his escape they had to repair the ceiling. Although many rich people w...
^^
Line 8, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...escape they had to repair the ceiling. Although many rich people were with him that hav...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ore support he was the one who escaped. the other hand, reading passage states that...
^^^
Line 8, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other hand, reading passage states that the Chevalier had a number of politicall...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246231155779 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.201005025126 0.158904122519 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0502512562814 0.0723426182421 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603015075377 0.0435111971325 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0904522613065 0.0277247811725 326% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100502512563 0.128828473217 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0402010050251 0.0370669169778 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72994548347 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201005025126 0.0208969081088 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0854271356784 0.128158765124 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150753768844 0.0158828679856 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251256281407 0.0114777025283 219% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1137.0 1645.83664459 69% => OK
No of words: 182.0 271.125827815 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24725274725 6.08160592843 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401098901099 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28021978022 0.287516216867 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181318681319 0.187439937562 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120879120879 0.113142543107 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72994548347 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.539623497131 120% => OK
Word variations: 65.0651447587 53.8517498576 121% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2222222222 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9967830953 49.3711431718 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 132.220823453 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.878197800319 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.39072847682 236% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.2442002442 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.1 1.90840788429 58% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.703871090126 0.549887131256 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121845106825 0.142949733639 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0971599788857 0.0787303798458 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630198142125 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.261564965674 0.139662658121 187% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291336502524 0.266732575781 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120257792793 0.103435571967 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.198327749573 0.414875509568 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0611116168773 0.0530846634433 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426127364872 0.40443939384 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830845288463 0.0528353158467 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.