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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare, the fact that has a great impact on the way people are living. In my opinion, the consequences are not fasinating. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, People are turning to be completely dependent on microwaves for their cooking. A vast majority of the people are purchasing readily- made food where they only have to put it in the microwave for several minutes, after which they can promptly eat it. Unfortunately, this is so bad because the microwave itself is very threatening to people's health. It is well known that t...
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Sentence: In my opinion, the consequences are not fasinating.
Error: fasinating Suggestion: fascinating
Sentence: In the past, the best moments were when all family members would sit around a table, and enjoy eating a meal together, where all the chats and coversation would be taking place Nevertheless, because food has become easy to prepare, nowadays each member of the family would be preparing his own meal alone, and might even be eating at different time of that of the other family members.
Error: coversation Suggestion: conversation
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1697 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.794 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.523 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.892 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
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