Internet is good communication skills that was introduced to World. Some people think that internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to such information may cause problem. In my opinion, we have to us internet and it contains a lot of information especially useful for young people. I believe we only can be differentiate from older generation by the use of internet.
First of all, I believe that our difference from old generation is internet. If we want to say our difference from older generation we can always say internet, even year by year difference is so obvious that ten years ago we can not talk through speaker but nowadays we can talk through speaker with our family showing our face and charecter. We could only speak with our relatives by phone and if they were long distance it was charged extra money. However now by the help of internet everything is free,whatsapp,skype and ovoo.
Moreover, we can search by use pf Internet about our subject in science and even an actor in wikkipedia. Every assigment in school is with the help of Internet. Even now that is the election of USA the assignments are about president election in school and people need internet to know about debate and everything around each campaign.
Furthermore, even people can know each other through internet they can date online and after that maybe marry. I personally am against of those online marriage but in my opinion they can for first date use online just to know each other and each other hobbies.
In summary, I believe that internet is beneficial for human being nowadays becaause of information it gives us about world ,communication long distance, asigments and dating.
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Essay evaluation report
Internet is good communication skills that was introduced to World.
Internet is a good communication that was introduced to the World.
I believe we only can be differentiate from older generation
I believe we only can differentiate from older generation
Definitions of differentiate
verb
recognize or ascertain what makes (someone or something) different.
children can differentiate the past from the present
make or become different in the process of growth or development.
the receptors are developed and differentiated into sense organs
transform (a function) into its derivative.
In his reply Leibniz gave some details of the principles of his differential calculus including the rule for differentiating a function of a function.
Sentence: I personally am against of those online marriage but in my opinion they can for first date use online just to know each other and each other hobbies.
Description: The tag a modal auxillary is not usually followed by for
Suggestion: Refer to can and for
Sentence: If we want to say our difference from older generation we can always say internet, even year by year difference is so obvious that ten years ago we can not talk through speaker but nowadays we can talk through speaker with our family showing our face and charecter.
Error: charecter Suggestion: character
Sentence: Every assigment in school is with the help of Internet.
Error: assigment Suggestion: assignment
Sentence: In summary, I believe that internet is beneficial for human being nowadays becaause of information it gives us about world ,communication long distance, asigments and dating.
Error: becaause Suggestion: because
Error: asigments Suggestion: augments
flaws:
1. Still need to talk about problems, and then talk we have solutions to solve the problems.
2. No. of Different Words: 148 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1394 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.774 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.817 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.217 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whatsapp
... the help of internet everything is free,whatsapp,skype and ovoo. Moreover, we can sea...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e of information it gives us about world ,communication long distance, asigments a...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in summary', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261829652997 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.1261829653 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0820189274448 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0567823343849 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0883280757098 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.15141955836 0.118717715034 128% => OK
Participles: 0.018927444795 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8343254424 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018927444795 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00188951952338 167% => OK
Determiners: 0.0567823343849 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0315457413249 0.0209618222197 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00315457413249 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1720.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 290.0 408.028673835 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93103448276 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331034482759 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258620689655 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196551724138 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120689655172 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8343254424 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506896551724 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.0956678995 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3333333333 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6265706614 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.1954022989 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.59302325581 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275468961342 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162340917292 0.103427244359 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106619565662 0.0752933317313 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583554454784 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199278787127 0.151897553556 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128764065319 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105057805361 0.0781384742642 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213475906847 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.076808414478 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1733660667 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120825267667 0.0618886996521 195% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.