The reading and listening passage are both discussing about Toreya decline. The reading passage states that we can support Toreya three by three ways.
First, the reading claims that we can reestablish them. However the listening passage refutes this idea by saing that due to global warming the climate is changing,if we reestablish them the climate which is changing to cooler and daper area. Tryer need dry climate to survive.
Moreover,the article posits that we can change their climate to north.However the professor says that it is going to be far from black low trees. According to the professor, it needs some assisted migration.
furthermore, the reading says that we can preserve them in research centres. The professor opposes this by saying they are not large enough and diverse. If we have relatively large ,we have to think of diseases in long term.
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Essay evaluation report
if we reestablish them the climate which is changing to cooler and daper area.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
in long term.
in a long term.
flaws:
No. of Words: 146 250
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 17 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 146 250
No. of Characters: 702 1200
No. of Different Words: 86 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.476 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.808 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.345 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.864 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.409 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.654 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.262 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assage states that we can support Toreya three by three ways. First, the readi...
^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ng claims that we can reestablish them. However the listening passage refutes this idea...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... passage refutes this idea by saing that due to global warming the climate is cha...
^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...o global warming the climate is changing,if we reestablish them the climate which i...
^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...changing to cooler and daper area. Tryer need dry climate to survive. Moreover...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...need dry climate to survive. Moreover,the article posits that we can change their...
^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...at we can change their climate to north.However the professor says that it is going to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...at we can change their climate to north.However the professor says that it is going to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...r, it needs some assisted migration. furthermore, the reading says that we can preserve ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and diverse. If we have relatively large ,we have to think of diseases in long ter...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192546583851 0.261695866417 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.211180124224 0.158904122519 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0683229813665 0.0723426182421 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0435111971325 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0869565217391 0.0277247811725 314% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0931677018634 0.128828473217 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0496894409938 0.0370669169778 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59893484353 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0208969081088 208% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0993788819876 0.128158765124 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248447204969 0.0158828679856 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00621118012422 0.0114777025283 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 873.0 1645.83664459 53% => OK
No of words: 143.0 271.125827815 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1048951049 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.04852973271 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370629370629 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286713286713 0.287516216867 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167832167832 0.187439937562 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104895104895 0.113142543107 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59893484353 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 145.348785872 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.539623497131 114% => OK
Word variations: 53.1728592441 53.8517498576 99% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3 21.7502111507 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0749347069 49.3711431718 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 132.220823453 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 21.7502111507 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.878197800319 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.39072847682 295% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.9713286713 50.5018328374 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.981818181818 1.90840788429 51% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446043901777 0.549887131256 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137601707831 0.142949733639 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0782853611538 0.0787303798458 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615450170971 0.631733273073 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174981662382 0.139662658121 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19132137891 0.266732575781 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788870723986 0.103435571967 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270991545953 0.414875509568 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0572787961859 0.0530846634433 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285212911293 0.40443939384 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741500039097 0.0528353158467 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.