What you eat is very much important for your health and daily life, that combines your both household and professional ilves. Today's busy schedule does not permit much time for thinking about the most basic stuffs like food. And during lunch times or in the evening at office, what comes in mind first, is the popular restaurants around. And it is always easy to pick convenience over consequences comprised of health hazards, missing family times and sometimes horrific costs of high street restaurants. And these are the reasons I do prefer to prepare and eat at home.
First and foremost, health cannot be traded off for anything. Good food is the primary pillar of one's health. Making food at home the quality can be controlled from the very beginning of the process. Fresh produces can be used to prepare the meal and amount of ingredients can also be suited to one's taste. Even certain elements can be reduced from the overall diet like saturated fat causing obesity. And all these food parameters cannot be controlled when the food is bought ready made from outside. As this happened to me, when I started take lunch at office, within six months I gained 6 kilograms of weights and went out of the Body Mass Index range. Switching back to home made lunch helped me to get in shape quickly.
Furthermore, some people argues the environment and multitude of culinary in restaurants where one can meet new people and taste new foods. That may be true but in other way this is stealing the family time which otherwise one would have spent with his family. And I do agree with the later part. The little time left, after today's squeezing work schedule, should be well spent with the dear ones. That's why I believe taking dinner at home provides me that opportunity to share my day with my parents and know their whereabouts. This way eating at home can be a family culture and bring members more close to each other.
Finally preparing food at home can be far less costly than the high street restaurants downtown or even than the food stands besides roads. Sometimes preparing food at home can save ten folds of money, which is important now a days with respect to the treacherous economic condition of the whole world. Saving money for even the near future should in everybody's agenda and that can be started with making the food at home.
In conclusion, for some people there may be reasons for eating outside, but I beleive the health, family and cost benefits of eating home made foods outweighs the perks of restaurants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rific costs of high street restaurants. And these are the reasons I do prefer to pr...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ing. Good food is the primary pillar of ones health. Making food at home the quality...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...hould be well spent with the dear ones. Thats why I believe taking dinner at home pro...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ng members more close to each other. Finally preparing food at home can be far less ...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... ten folds of money, which is important now a days with respect to the treacherous economi...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... folds of money, which is important now a days with respect to the treacherous economi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257261410788 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.170124481328 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0829875518672 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045643153527 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0352697095436 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122406639004 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0622406639004 0.0351676179071 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38839839676 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207468879668 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00207468879668 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788381742739 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0331950207469 0.0209618222197 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165975103734 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2539.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 443.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73137697517 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322799097065 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198645598194 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.130925507901 0.174417080927 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880361173815 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38839839676 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562076749436 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.4524101309 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2608695652 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.876977261 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.391304348 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 39.1254293846 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.76033057851 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18713026463 0.300154397459 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.093868854254 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0463623066779 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489669212167 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158568569556 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703134327146 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388051144582 0.0781384742642 50% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299382953836 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0450701023588 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120548244242 0.210909579961 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403650475806 0.0618886996521 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.