One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?
Overpopulation is one of the most serious problems facing the world, particularly in developing countries. This piece of writing will figure out some negative impacts of overpopulation on our life as well as propose the solution to those.
To begin with, when population increases, the demand of food, medical, transportation as well as fuel will surge dramatically. Obviously, the amount of waste from household, hospital, public that goes to landfills will surely increase progressively. In addition, the emission from automobiles and other vehicles also rise sharply which leading to air pollution. As a result, our environment is polluted heavily. In developing countries such as Vietnam, Indonesia and India where public transportation facilities are very poor, increasing in resident will put public transportation as well as roads in crowed people and vehicles.
To reduce the negative effects from overpopulation, Government should impose the policies to limit the number of immigrants into metropolises where always are the first choice for immigration. In addition, Government need invest to build factories recycling and residences also should support in the classification of garbage as well as limit the use of non-recycles products. Developing the clean energies should be treasured to reduce the dirty emissions from automobiles.
In conclusion, overpopulation is the main reason of environment pollution and traffic jam. However, there are several things that Government could do to address the issues, such as introducing the new policies to limit immigrants into big cities, investing to build the waste recycling factories and focusing on clean energies development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'energies'' or 'energy's'?
Suggestion: energies'; energy's
...cycling factories and focusing on clean energies development.
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...focusing on clean energies development.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276595744681 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.141843971631 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0744680851064 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0744680851064 0.0501214627716 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00709219858156 0.0437548338989 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.120567375887 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0496453900709 0.0403226058552 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.27748711191 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390070921986 0.0326793684256 119% => OK
Particles: 0.00354609929078 0.00163938923432 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780141843972 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283687943262 0.021408717616 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.011925033212 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1691.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.71031746032 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.440476190476 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345238095238 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.285714285714 0.203846283523 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.214285714286 0.137316102897 156% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27748711191 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.9066895801 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3463372565 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.916666667 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 55.5238095238 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414905512613 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873096486027 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0579199368095 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578400681901 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172580213962 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192142135537 0.134430193775 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114217695191 0.0742795772207 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366148669812 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0741269747359 0.0638462369009 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308313897005 0.228012699653 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970414530344 0.058150111329 167% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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