Some people believe that detailed criminal acts shown by newspaper and television.It should be restricted in country. Do u agree or disagree with the statement?
Media is a form of mass communication. Presently, media have tendency to demonstrate expose criminal acts by different mediums. Thus, it is asserted by some masses that large discription must be banned in our country. Here, I would like to partially accord with given statement.
To start with, there are numerous points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, detailed criminals activities adversely effect upon dwellers of nation. To illustrate, people especially ill-mannnered can get adequate idea by reading or watching news. As a result, such people are expected to imitiate illegal activities which could be perilous to mankind. Consequently, crime rates of a nation will drastically. Moreover, youngster will get encouraged to do such activities to employ money with illegal ways instead of working hard so that theg can fulfill their desire. Hence, society always likely be under the threat of violence as majority of people will start to commit crimes. By contrast ,opposite wind is there.
They think that, every citizen have right to information. Initially, large description of crime play significant role to inform people. To be specific, if people are aware of how criminal activities are committed by terrorists so they can prepare themselves how to handle the situation like terrorism. Therefore, reading or listening detailed crime reports should be considered as helping hand to masses.
To recapitulate, citizen has fundamental right of information. This trend is likely to both boon and bane. It is imperative to editor or holder of distinct media channels to provide optimum techniques and skills to face criminal acts
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as a result', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250847457627 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.179661016949 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915254237288 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542372881356 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0305084745763 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105084745763 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0474576271186 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92186731605 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0677966101695 0.0326793684256 207% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00338983050847 0.00163938923432 207% => OK
Determiners: 0.0305084745763 0.0861772015684 35% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338983050847 0.021408717616 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135593220339 0.011925033212 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1666.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38314176245 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417624521073 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32183908046 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241379310345 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157088122605 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92186731605 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659003831418 0.56093040696 117% => OK
Word variations: 76.9980610269 60.7387585426 127% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7368421053 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3842984612 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.814263465372 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.9207501512 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.52564102564 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186441874366 0.332605444948 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0451522548348 0.102741220458 44% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0421713742084 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448827669666 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141667606569 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635095793988 0.134430193775 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499767205457 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28483202888 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.081920000691 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132940515289 0.228012699653 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459493131795 0.058150111329 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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