You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir,
My name is Max Gordon, I passed a final job interview for the IT Engineer in your company on October 15. Two days later I received your call and you informed me that I am hired. We made an arrangement that I will start to my working duties at your company on November 15, because I had some unfinished business in my current job.
I’m very sorry to tell, that I will not be able to start working on November 15 due personal issues. The matter is that, my uncle got broke his leg yesterday and I need to fly to Russia and take care of him, because I am the only one relative he has. Moreover, he asked me to support him financially, so I can’t deny his request.
I want to sorry again for this inconvenience and ask you to postpone the starting date. I can assure you that will be back to England on 22nd of November. If you allow me, I will start working on the day later, on November 23. I remember you told me that I need a time for studying my new duties, so I want to assure you that I have ability to catch a new material fast and won’t let you down.
I look to hearing back from you and hope you will accept my plea.
Yours faithfully,
Max Gordon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Max Gordon, I passed a final ...
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Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...don, I passed a final job interview for the IT Engineer in your company on October 15....
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: Engineers
...passed a final job interview for the IT Engineer in your company on October 15. Two days...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18045112782 0.220444632235 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.184210526316 0.167888034529 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0375939849624 0.0606518309736 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338345864662 0.0506257000042 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.176691729323 0.118615021944 149% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0977443609023 0.107062808482 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0225563909774 0.041066498444 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39356752472 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451127819549 0.0385302599488 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00751879699248 0.00132118243153 569% => OK
Determiners: 0.0413533834586 0.0714148451538 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263157894737 0.0191574576366 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00375939849624 0.00930345855455 40% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1184.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.134020619 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12554112554 5.53046319177 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.229437229437 0.284621296913 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186147186147 0.211203875043 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116883116883 0.133321485273 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.047619047619 0.0843313296314 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39356752472 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 59.3753264888 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.25 16.4300151701 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.268111867 44.7399317507 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 90.9928171075 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.4300151701 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 37.8647186147 37.5504026743 101% => OK
Elegance: 0.761904761905 1.13073093955 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43001520578 0.331212695627 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109665928526 0.0927372745006 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763160706307 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602037975464 0.579516596996 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162610771596 0.180689518051 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170752199341 0.122183219658 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818077741724 0.0765303033291 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287595966571 0.211926503985 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0594740838563 0.0737400523855 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270554488677 0.203819188451 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072084214165 0.067151250289 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.