Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?
Controlling the growth of a population and limiting its extensive expansion, has recently become one of the important topics that emerged on the surface during the past couple of decades. Though the majority might be already in agreement of the importance of refraining people from having numerous children; they still don't agree on the correct and the most suitable approach to adopt in this regard. Some people thinks that the only way to achieve it, a government ought to inflict a bunch of restrictions and limitations on the parents. Opponents,perceive that there are many other possible ways!
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Sentence: Some people thinks that the only way to achieve it, a government ought to inflict a bunch of restrictions and limitations on the parents.
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Sentence: As the number of children is reduced, the family will be increase its capabilities in rising a child in a better shape with good health and well educated.
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