Gap year is a period of time between finishing secondary school and starting university that students spend on work or travel . It is boardly practiced in some countries. The merits and demerits are heated debated.
The disadvantage of gap year is that students realised they have wasted one whole year without any accomplishment. A gap year for working normally involve low-paid and undet stature job, which facilicate little for career after graduation. Further more, a gap year for travel worth less than studying in university. Thus, one precious year of youth is wasted for no gain comparing attend university right after graduation form senior higt school. In the latter situation, students start tegraduate one year early form university chich renders one year spare in their career.
One of the advantages of gap year is that students acknowledge the concept of work and income if they worked in gap year. Having a job indicates the independence of financy which require making ends meet the income. The working experience benefits students when they start their career. They will be better at managing personal economy and live a financially indenpent life. For instance, students with early working experence are capable of controling their expense within income and avoid recession to dependent financial situation.
Another advantage of gap year is that students develop social skills it they traveled in theri gap year. The best part of travelling it meeting different people, which facilitales social skills. Students have to communicate with different people in their journey, which requires skills to deal with. They improve their social skill in the process. The experience will benefits their working life when they graduate from university and commence their career. For example, students solve daily conflict better if they have the same experience during gap year.
To recapitulate, gap year has merits and flaws. The merit is a unique experience for whether latter working life or social skills. The flaw is students wasted theri time for nothing. It is students discretion of whether or not take a gap year before enrolling in universtiy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion:
...chool. In the latter situation, students start tegraduate one year early form uni...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ill in the process. The experience will benefits their working life when they graduate f...
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...r nothing. It is students discretion of whether or not take a gap year before enrolling in uni...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.308510638298 0.247107183377 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.167553191489 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0877659574468 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0265957446809 0.0501214627716 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505319148936 0.0437548338989 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132978723404 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0505319148936 0.0403226058552 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65916714824 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0106382978723 0.0326793684256 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0664893617021 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00531914893617 0.021408717616 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0159574468085 0.011925033212 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2172.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29565217391 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414492753623 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313043478261 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220289855072 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127536231884 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65916714824 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.3567959605 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5876671873 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4347826087 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.260869565217 0.814263465372 32% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.3043478261 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.01086956522 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23352133204 0.332605444948 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0997404242924 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.072785604292 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473097387283 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0971214353952 0.148594505496 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857976402266 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556532187227 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342498575051 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0726523406641 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16840332711 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555359588539 0.058150111329 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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