Both reading passage and lecturer are discussing about Rembrandt which is a painter of Seventeenth century.
The lecturer cast doubt on reading that author says the painting related to Rembrandt.
First of all, the author says that there was a painting of an elderly woman.However lecturer mentions that XRay and analysis of painting increased the age of the woman. There was reason behind changing that painting to discrete cramatic lady that differes from original painting.
Moreover, the author tries to say that the master of painting is shadow and light. the lecturer rebutes this by stating that original painting illustrates the face and that is the reason why it is not a shadow.
Finally,the author argues that at the back of the painting there are several woods from different trees attaching by glue,creating panel glue. The lecturer states that there is only single piece of wood and it is the same tree than the other. She does not know w
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Essay evaluation report
Rembrandt which is a painter of Seventeenth century.
Rembrandt who is a painter in the Seventeenth century.
the painting related to Rembrandt.
the painting is related to Rembrandt.
There was reason behind
There was a reason behind
Sentence: There was reason behind changing that painting to discrete cramatic lady that differes from original painting.
Error: differes Suggestion: differed
Error: cramatic Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, the author tries to say that the master of painting is shadow and light. the lecturer rebutes this by stating that original painting illustrates the face and that is the reason why it is not a shadow.
Error: rebutes Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Words: 163 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 17 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 163 250
No. of Characters: 776 1200
No. of Different Words: 90 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.761 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.315 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.565 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.421 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.707 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assage and lecturer are discussing about Rembrandt which is a painter of Seventee...
^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...here was a painting of an elderly woman.However lecturer mentions that XRay and analysi...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...here was a painting of an elderly woman.However lecturer mentions that XRay and analysi...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...master of painting is shadow and light. the lecturer rebutes this by stating that o...
^^^
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...eason why it is not a shadow. Finally,the author argues that at the back of the p...
^^^^
Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , creating
...s from different trees attaching by glue,creating panel glue. The lecturer states that th...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258620689655 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.183908045977 0.158904122519 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747126436782 0.0723426182421 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.0435111971325 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0172413793103 0.0277247811725 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14367816092 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0459770114943 0.0370669169778 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56690931618 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172413793103 0.0208969081088 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132183908046 0.128158765124 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.0114777025283 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 959.0 1645.83664459 58% => OK
No of words: 160.0 271.125827815 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99375 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.04852973271 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36875 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2125 0.187439937562 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.08125 0.113142543107 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56690931618 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.539623497131 105% => OK
Word variations: 48.1366978062 53.8517498576 89% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7777777778 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6879805794 49.3711431718 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 132.220823453 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 21.7502111507 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.878197800319 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 45.2777777778 50.5018328374 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.90243902439 1.90840788429 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.634853540074 0.549887131256 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186694938708 0.142949733639 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.091939774412 0.0787303798458 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.745174703743 0.631733273073 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.244668974177 0.139662658121 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30912942193 0.266732575781 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133017296792 0.103435571967 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337459871827 0.414875509568 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.146283827316 0.0530846634433 276% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390046373773 0.40443939384 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115020177541 0.0528353158467 218% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.