What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Thanks to my parents who teach me to respect senior and love junior. The most important qualities of son or daughter is politeness, obey to their parents, and help them. The characters or qualities remains same throughout the life. It is because, the children (In future parenst) wants to their child to follow these characters, everybody wants to be good example, and modern education makes us more good in every sector.
Firstly, every parents wants to be their son or daughter juts like them. They wants that their son or daughter should follow their customs and religions. My parents teach me how to respect my grandmothers or the relatives , who come in my home. That is everbody wants to be their son or daughter politie. For this, they teach their children moral things.Throughout the life, person can not change his/ her characters for this rason. That why the qualities remains unchanged.
Secondly, everybody wants to be good example. My Uncle Joj is very social person. He helps when person in trouble. He is very helpful. My uncle friends want to be just like him . To some extent, they are success . This example shows that the good qualities remains unchanged. On the other hand, my friend Sundar have bad habbit. He have the habbit of stealing goods of other from the early childhood. He never give up this habbit. These two examples shows that, person habit remains unchanged throughout his life.
Thirdly,modern technology and tools are the important factors that governs our characters. They augment our characters whether in good way or in bad way. Because of Television, we tend to accomosted in the character that we develop. It remains deep rooted. As , a result. We develop such characters that is difficut to remove.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...because, the children In future parenst wants to their child to follow these cha...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ir son or daughter juts like them. They wants that their son or daughter should follo...
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...respect my grandmothers or the relatives , who come in my home. That is everbody w...
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... they teach their children moral things.Throughout the life, person can not change his he...
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...hout the life, person can not change his her characters for this rason. That why ...
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...y uncle friends want to be just like him . To some extent, they are success . This...
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...e him . To some extent, they are success . This example shows that the good qualit...
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...d, my friend Sundar have bad habbit. He have the habbit of stealing goods of other f...
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...ther from the early childhood. He never give up this habbit. These two examples show...
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...hat we develop. It remains deep rooted. As , a result. We develop such characters ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95563139932 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66259935371 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 35.9805998634 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7777777778 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8518518519 20.6045352989 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177352968438 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529068025373 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06618730554 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110413824073 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503783424914 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 58.1214874552 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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