This is a proven fact that various cities, town or village aggregate to form a society however its major cities put forward a condensed model of the society. The most important characteristics of a society, such as technological, social, historical and economic characteristics can be analyzed from studying its major cities as these act as the economic and historical center of the society. That is the reason why any government uses the major cities to serve as the testing grounds for any ambitious project before implementing in other cities.
The metropolitans perfectly demonstrate the technological standing and escalation of the society; the major cities are equipped with the best architecture, most advanced public transport systems, perfectly capable health care and rejuvenation facilities. Furthermore, in post-agrarian societies, most jobs are contained within cities. That is commerce is conducted in the cities.
The major percentage of the population of a society resides in metropolitans; people from all sort of background live in the major cities thus various different cultures and traditions unite to evolve as the culture of theses major cities.
When any society undergoes major political, social or economical changes and advancements the cities which play a vital role in this change becomes the metropolitans and thus these cities have a rich historical background which is deeply rooted in the history of the society.
Some people may argue that a few major cities can not account for a vast society and rural areas and small towns play a vital role in determining its characteristics; which is agreeable but that does not undermine the fact that these cities do act as a small sample of this vast society, due to the above-mentioned reasons. These cities play a central role in every major functionality of the society and thus we can conclude that major characteristics of a society can be understood by studying its major cities.
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- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 76
- “Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.”Write a response in whic 79
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today." 73
- TOEFL integrated writing: communal online encyclopedia 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07408481999 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3048017824 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.4 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182724874764 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827792217729 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281644812103 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107149490713 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370316815251 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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