Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Every people living in society have their talent. Talent is just a special skill of doing work with ease and with greater perfection.
Children having their own talent to be identified by their parents and accordingly for developing that talent proper training is required for mastering that talent. As at an early age mind of children are very open and has no hindrances, they learn every thing easily. For example when new iron sword is maid for better development at the end, proper hammering is required (in-short proper training). This hammering is only effective at earlier stage, which not effective after it get cooled. Another example Sachin Tendulkar had in born talent of playing cricket which on proper training at younger age helped him in developing his courier in cricket with fame.
Every children has their talent there is no as such special talent, with proper training every thing can be made special. Child having skill of making good painting and other child has skill of dancing this both talent are different we can't say which talent is special.
As author said society should identify children having special talent which I disagree, every talent is special in itself, so society should recognise children talent and proper training should be given for developing their talent so excellent that they can make their courier using that talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people living in society have their tal...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the end, proper hammering is required in short proper training . This hammerin...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng is required in short proper training . This hammering is only effective at ear...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ng his courier in cricket with fame. Every children has their talent there is no a...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...in cricket with fame. Every children has their talent there is no as such specia...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...very children has their talent there is no as such special talent, with proper tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07488986784 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3264308934 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1754626006 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438604276992 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180417661303 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113441739281 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275859450184 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977234258885 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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