The supplied bar graph demonstrate the result of a study performed by personnel department on employees age group 18-30 and 45-60 year to evaluate to what extent various type of factors affecting work performance.
Overall, except two factors namely respect from colleagues and competent boss, all the given factors are affecting more the work result of 18-30 years age group in comparison to 45-60 years olds.
To begin with, the chance for personal development and promotion aspects are affecting around 100 and 90 percent of 18-30 years old employees while around 50 percent of 45-60 years old. in addition, a relaxed working environment is hampering the 90% of 18-30 years while the only 1/3rd of 45-60 aged employees.
In contrast, both the age groups are equally influenced by team spirit and work environment around 70% and 30% respectively. while competent boss and respects from colleagues are affecting slightly more to 40-60years whereas money and job satisfactions merely more are worrying to 18-30 years old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81983644047 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2137886434 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278046154224 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160920657843 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869183167397 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201727844549 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745383566678 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.