The reading passage and listening passage both are discussing villagers in Iraq constructing the rail road line.The listening passage cast doubt on the claims that was made on reading in general.
The reading passage states that archaeologist found that vessels were changed to batteries it was all that has been excavated. First of all, the lecturer does not think that vessels were used alone as it was said by archaeologists in the reading passage.
Moreover, copper cylinder was stated by the author nearly located. However, the lecturer disputes this by saying that it was not their intention and accidentally it happened and they were not used for holding scrolls of scared text.
On the other hand, the reading passage states that ancient people? What the ancient people can have done to electricity? The lecturer states that no Electricity was found and used at that time by batteries. Ancient doctors may see battery and used it for different reasons as they knew it made electrical shock. Holy person at that time may knew the power of electricity and people believe him.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...in Iraq constructing the rail road line.The listening passage cast doubt on the cla...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that was made on reading in general. The reading passage states that archaeologi...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f scared text. On the other hand, the reading passage states that ancient peop...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rer states that no Electricity was found and used at that time by batteries. Anci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, in general, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1373.03311258 66% => OK
No of words: 180.0 270.72406181 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06111111111 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58520839956 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7503142846 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315545435659 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133828750305 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740692043225 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174137357614 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905837483151 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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