The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
The Author of the argument predicts that the housing prices of the maple county will significantly increase if the proposed measure is taken .The author supports his prediction by giving two examples of the pine county and chestnut county. Although these examples supports the author ‘s prediction , It neglects several possibilities that could make the author’s proposal a liability for the council of the county.
To begin with author cites the example of the two county .He makes the broader generalization based on the narrow examples .he states that the pine county adopted the restrictions on the development of the new residential housing and the prices increased .It is more likely that the things applicable for the pine county are not applicable for the maple county .Also, the author does not give any information about the geographical location of the two county .Are these two county serve in the same geographical location .It is also possible that the pine county is located in the area which is central in the city .This may have increased the prices in the housing in Pine county. As mentioned by the proponents the chestnut county has not seen the surge in prices. Thus the author needs an answer for the above question in order to justifiably conclude
Also the author mention that the Pine county has surge in the prices over the period of 15 years .The 15 year period is much longer and the increase in the housing prices in these years is not that significant. It is quite possible that As the city has developed .There was increase in the population of the city .which has caused the housing prices to rise. Author needs an additional evidences to answer that Does the restriction is only factor contributing to the higher prices.
Thus the author glosses over several question such as the geographical location of the county ,The development of the county,Population of the county etc.the author needs an additional evidence to answer all the question in order to justifiably conclude .It these factors are not considered there may be loss for the council of the mapel county
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- The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 355.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95492957746 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71524909386 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414084507042 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => OK
Sentence length SD: 179.081641647 57.8364921388 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.875 119.503703932 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.375 23.324526521 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.25449101796 761% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167457086667 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803534664001 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600736254138 0.0701772020484 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117976026654 0.128457276422 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541400143088 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 14.3799401198 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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