Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that professional athletes, such as football players, are paid much more than they deserve. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who still argue that the salary of athletes must be high due to the nature of their profession. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that professional athletes deserve their high rate wages. My statement will be substantiated by the following paragraphs.
To begin with, in contrast to the other persons in the other jobs, they cannot professionally work more than 10 years. They will reach out the peak of their profession when they are in 30s and after that their performance wanes until they have to announce their retirement. At this time, while most of them do not have any skill they become jobless and the only thing that they can possibly do is taking a risk and investing their money on something and hoping to make profits to afford their living expenses after retiree. As an example, Houshang is one of the old football players which his salary during the time was the highest rate. Last year, we found that he is bankrupted and now he owes a large amount of money to banks.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that continuing such profession for even 5 years is not guaranteed at all because such people are likely to get injured in every moment. When they get injured, they should tolerate much pain and may have several surgical operations to come back to the field again. Also, there some cases that player has accidentally been injured during a match such that he could not come back to the field again. Additionally, there have been some players that have passed away during the matches due to heart attacks which are caused by high stresses. For instance, Alireza is one of such athletes in my country that got badly injured during a football match and now he is paralyzed. Hence, such people which dedicate their health and life to entertain people, are deserved to be paid at a high rate.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I firmly believed that athletes must be paid at high rates. Professional athletes put their time and health to play in matches while they know they cannot work for a long period of time and also they can be hurt in every moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...me jobless and the only thing that they can possibly do is taking a risk and investing their...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e they know they cannot work for a long period of time and also they can be hurt in every mome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71571072319 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48430624898 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523690773067 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4886713988 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283398168452 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871454106466 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497045204563 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170854090398 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069044356345 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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