during a journey of life, a person meet many peers, which may treat bad or good behavior to him. A author claim that a old friend is more important than making new friends, but I disagree with author. In a person life, every friend plays a vital role for a successful completion of one's life.
In 21st century, people move and migrate a lot. A person may born in one place, spend his childhood and college at another place and goes to university at another place and similarly, do job at another place and spend his entire place at another place. So, during this life process, we can be impossible to only one childhood friends because after a school life, two childhood friends may go to different path in a pursue of career that is entirely different from each other career. Therefore, we have to make new friends when we confront a new place or new situation when our old friends are not with us to help or talk or hang around.
In additional, as a human beings, we may want to know a culture, tradition, and life style, which are from other part of world and utterly unknown to us. So, to know their culture, tradition and life style, one of the best medium is making a new friends belonging to that culture. a book or internet, even though, may serve as aid to know their culture but knowing form those people gives us a lively and unforgettable knowledge and experience.
A person, who is social or make new friends, are affable in nature and mostly liked by the people rather than an introverted person who always seek a old friends and discourage a people who want to make friendship with him. In additional, our society always like a person who are likely to make friends and participate in social program. And, always wanting a old friend may lead a person to spend to do any activity lonely because his old friend may not be with him at a time and may lead to depression due to lonely.
However, it does not mean that we break friendship with old friends. Among our several friends, our childhood friends are those, who are mostly intimate and we can share our feeling and problem, to them so frankly than other new friends. further, we can also insist them to severe degree to do something than a new friends.
Finally, it is best to keep our old friendship along with to make a new friend in every situation of life when we confront a new peer because both of them have pivotal importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
during a journey of life, a person meet many p...
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... may treat bad or good behavior to him. A author claim that a old friend is more ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...od behavior to him. A author claim that a old friend is more important than makin...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tal role for a successful completion of ones life. In 21st century, people move a...
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Message: Did you mean 'bear' or 'be born'?
Suggestion: bear; be born
...le move and migrate a lot. A person may born in one place, spend his childhood and c...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ood friends may go to different path in a pursue of career that is entirely different fr...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...ng around. In additional, as a human beings, we may want to know a culture, traditi...
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Suggestion: A
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Suggestion: an
...n an introverted person who always seek a old friends and discourage a people who...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in social program. And, always wanting a old friend may lead a person to spend t...
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Suggestion: Further
...them so frankly than other new friends. further, we can also insist them to severe degr...
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Suggestion: friend
...evere degree to do something than a new friends. Finally, it is best to keep our old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, frankly, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49545454545 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44247452764 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461363636364 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6737691034 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202265039006 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807209528443 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770916120276 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120262928725 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385760274632 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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