Although education plays a pivotal role in building cultured communities. However, I totally disagree that uneducated person has nothing to teach to an educated one. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, an uneducated person can never be depicted of being deprived from morals. A person could be uneducated for whatever reason it is. However, this would never mean that he could not have been raised among a good family, who might have taught him respect, honesty and fedelity as well. For example; there is that uneducated guy whom I know, and who was not able to get a...
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