Today, broadcasts accompany their news by relative pictures in an attempt to absorb more audiences. It is believed that these pictures are more effective than words. This will be proven by analyzing how pictures are more impressive and are not in need of translation.
For one, I believe that people are able to recall pictures even if they have seen them along ago. This is due to the fact that images are far more impressive. Take news about child labor as an example. Even thousand words would not signify the empathy to them compare to a picture which shows their difficulties. However, reading written stories take much more time. As this example shows images convey concepts faster, easier and more impressively.
In addition to this, picture is an international language and is not in need of translation when it is seen by foreigners. The result of this fact is that many international organizations such as WHO, United Nations, etc; for announcing a widespread phenomenon usually use pictures. For instance, an orange hand symbolizes this motto: “no violence against women”. These images are same all over the world and people with diverse level of education and different cultures could catch the concept similarly. However, words would not play this role.
As shown above, I believe strongly on the phrased verses says” a picture is worth than thousand words” and I think an appropriate picture couple to written news can act as a synthesizer. It is predicted news agencies are going to use this tool more and more in the future.
- Task2:Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? 67
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. 84
- Some people feel that entertainers ( eg. Film stars , pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid 74
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree 70
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school Others however believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...any international organizations such as WHO, United Nations, etc; for announcing a ...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: WORTH_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse', the comparative of 'bad'?
Suggestion: worse
... phrased verses says' a picture is worth than thousand words' and I think a...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...rses says' a picture is worth than thousand words' and I think an appropriate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77463568441 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3897254763 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286071762297 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964354657156 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731618301657 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181773463854 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669715075133 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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