"Societies should try to save every plant and animal species,regardless of the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well being".
The statement "Societies should try to save every plant and animal species,regardless of the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well being" is certainly a complex and controversial statement.So,I partially agree and disagree with the statement. I provide my reasons, examples and evidence in support of my point of view in the following paragraphs.
As we know in the past, our planet consists of enormous number of species and with pleasant surroundings and pleasing atmosphere.But when coming to this contemporary era the enormous number of species came to an finite number with pleasant surroundings turned to a highly sophisticated cosmopolitan cities and pleasing atmosphere turned to a highly toxic and poisonous carbon monoxide mixed with the atmosphere. Due to result of damage in the ecological cycle and increase in the extent of global warming.And our society needed to retain its previous scenario to maintain ecological balance and make our survival possible.
In Consolidation of my point of view:
Why i agree with this statement?
As we know that "man is a social animal", his desire and goal is towards earning money. And no matter what ,he never thinks about society and its welfare.His aim is to spend his efforts,time in expense of financially well being at any cost.This made may huge damage to the society, for example in the our world consists of wide variety of creatures,species and animals.But know due to modernizing methods, sophisticated modes of transport and highly developed society made many of those species to face extinction. Not only animals but also plants and many other species are extincted.this results in huge ecological imbalance and damages our environmental life cycle.A recent survey in Delhi states that it is one of the world's most polluted city and if this continues for next few years, this may be impossible for the existence of human beings and this is because of huge raising up of global warming in there by deep deforestation and extinction of many species are main causes.So, in order to make our world free from pollution and global warming then we need to maintain our society not only on the regardless of financially well being and even important is to save our society and many species from extinction and save them from endanger.
Why i disagree with this statement?
As we are in contemporary world, the life expectancy of normal human beings are declining to huge extent. And now in order to maintain our existence possible in our society, we need to maintain and improve our efforts, time in financial well being and regardless of any other other aspect rather than this. And as we know our society only the higher classes and ruling classes are respected and appreciated. The man with no money is no more even considered as a living being and made him to an opinion that there is no right for him to exist in this society.For example, as a survey in the world based on life expectancy in under developed nations are so far sympathetic because of due to poverty 100 people for every hour is loosing their life. This shows that every individual must put their efforts and time in financially well being in order to maintain their existence in this society.
Conclusion:
As i have provided irrefutable evidence in support of my point of view,i conclude my argument reiterating that "Societies should try to save every plant and animal species,regardless of the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well being" and efforts and time to be managed to maintain both the existence of his survival and species being in the danger of extinction.So my view is partially acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 42.0 14.8657303371 283% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3107.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07679738562 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04986669401 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436274509804 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 992.7 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => OK
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => OK
Sentence length SD: 184.785208643 60.3974514979 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.133333333 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8 23.4991977007 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365440074794 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131817693523 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18206160105 0.0758088955206 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174693476886 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.210984639888 0.0667264976115 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 14.1392134831 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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