Education and health care sectors are the two vital responsibilities of a government. Some people think that these both services should be made free of cost for the citizens,while others oppose this idea. I strongly believe, governments are not able to make these services free of cost, as education and treatment are too expensive nowadays.
The people who think that education and treatment for diseases should be free of cost have relevant reasons to support their argument.First and foremost, governments getting a significant amount of money from citizens as tax and government have to spend this money for the well being of citizens. Among the things which make a country progressive and developed, education and good health of people are the most important two. Therefore, governments must spend the tax money they received from public in these vital areas and available it free for all the citizens in the country. For example, in western countries treatment for diseases and education is free for all the citizens.Thus, they have a healthy, educated population in order to lead their country to success.
On the other hand, there are some important reasons to support later argument which is also my opinion. Firstly, it is almost impossible to give free treatment and education for all because these two are too costly in current scenario. Governments, especially in developing countries earning a small amount as tax payment . This small amount is not enough to provide free treatment and education for the large population in this countries. For instance, in India education and treatment for diseases are not free for citizens as the country have a population of 150 crores. Besides, the governments have other important responsibilities to look after such as securing its boarders and building sufficient infrastructure facilities which is also important for the growth of a nation.
To conclude, although education and health care sectors are the two important responsibilities of a government, it is impossible to make it free of cost as the government has some other important factors to take care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ld be made free of cost for the citizens,while others oppose this idea. I strongly bel...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...evant reasons to support their argument.First and foremost, governments getting a sig...
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Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
...c in these vital areas and available it free for all the citizens in the country. Fo...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...in the country. For example, in western countries treatment for diseases and education is...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... education is free for all the citizens.Thus, they have a healthy, educated populati...
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Suggestion: .
...es earning a small amount as tax payment . This small amount is not enough to prov...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d education for the large population in this countries. For instance, in India educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24117647059 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02765153761 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4933172858 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303260841912 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119830907861 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589845783527 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207402569559 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330430468088 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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