Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.
In the past, people spent much time at home with their family rather than now. This indicates togetherness as a main pillar of communication could be typically maintained as one of the solutions to reduce the sufferer of life. However, nowadays, people frequently have some action out of their home. As a result, the action might increase stress.
There are a number of reasons why people suffer from stress. Firstly, people spend much time in the office in which interpersonal relationship is massively built. This means many activities inquire regular contact with other people at wo...
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