"It is dangerous to trust only intelligence"
Intelligence plays a vital role in our world. one can only survive in this competitive world with intelligence. whereas there are less number of jobs and more candidates applied in the companies. Therefore the dull person is not get through it and do not find a good position and salary. Intelligent person will always polish our intellect skills.
Unoccupied mind is a devil workshop. Therefore if you have to keep healthy mind and body then mind should not vacant. On the contrary, intelligence is equally important with compassionate, loving and trustworthy. Therefore person got position in the world along with intelligence but not in the heart of the society. The combination of both rules over the world.
Human intelligence is the most powerful across the globe. One can provide reasons and also find all the solutions. However students is sitting in the competitive exams to get admission in prestigious colleges. In order to have a bright and successful future. In spite of this, one should have faith on other too. More significantly, no one want to live in isolation, one need to interact with others. If the interaction is healthy then only the hard work payoff. As a result, person should sincere along with intelligence.
Despite from this, if person is slave of intelligence then it will harmful in our life. If one should not compassinate , trustworthy and caring then one will fall in life. The person cannot get value in society. Hence it is unaccepted by society and no one will in his side. In addition, with this nature and attitude everyone dislike him and he become alone. At the end, he find out intelligence with sincere will give his a value around the world.
Apparently, intelligence is the key to find a place in the world and you become famous and known accross the globe. This approach would equally important with the person having a place of trustworthy, loving and compassion. A little knowledge might be dangerous, if it will impact on our principles and person can fall in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...igence plays a vital role in our world. one can only survive in this competitive wo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...is competitive world with intelligence. whereas there are less number of jobs and more ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...re candidates applied in the companies. Therefore the dull person is not get through it a...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
... Unoccupied mind is a devil workshop. Therefore if you have to keep healthy mind and bo...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
... compassionate, loving and trustworthy. Therefore person got position in the world along ...
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Suggestion: However,
...easons and also find all the solutions. However students is sitting in the competitive ...
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...tion, one need to interact with others. If the interaction is healthy then only th...
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Suggestion: ,
...our life. If one should not compassinate , trustworthy and caring then one will fa...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...The person cannot get value in society. Hence it is unaccepted by society and no one ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...him and he become alone. At the end, he find out intelligence with sincere will give...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, in addition, as a result, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96783625731 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84273453935 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497076023392 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 22.2117259162 60.3974514979 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.9259259259 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705062053703 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226098519149 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029955287285 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461487345213 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176960714721 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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