People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Health is crucial aspect of life. Everything is depends on our health. There a lot of option, in terms of what we must to do, to be a healthy person. An example; sport, eat vegetables, fruits, nuts, go to gym, set on diet, do more exercise so on. However we have not so much time do these all things. In my opinion, to stay healthy we have to just three essential things. There are: drink a lot of water, do daily exercise and think positively every day. If we will do these I’ m guarantee that we will rarely visit to hospital. In the following essay I will explain how these influence on our health.
First of all, I want to start with water. Water has a vast impact in our health. Because we know that our body consist 80% of water. The scientists have shown that a person must drink 2 liter of water if not, shortage of water drives to heart disorders, blood disorders. If human’s blood system is disordered so that allows to a lot of illnesses. Consuming water every day we will save stability of blood pressure. I have a friend and she always drinks water and I have never seen that she was ill once. My grandfather, when he ill he never consumes any antibiotics, he drinks only water and after an hour he gets well. So drinking water daily helps stay healthy.
Secondly, doing daily exercise we strength our health. There are a lot of reason why we have to do regularly do exercise. We do for brain, to be energetic, boost our health stability. As medicine stuffs say “we do exercise for brain”. All internal body system controlled by brain and brain needs more oxygen to work properly. When we start to some activity a blood pressure works intensively then brain can get more oxygen. In fact doing exercise helps us to be more energetic and being always open-minded. I don’t know how activities helps us to be energetic but I can give example. My one roommate every morning does exercise and when she at lesson she is very active when all class fall a sleep.These a few reasons and examples benefits of exercise for health. We can write a lot of reasons and examples but these which I provide above explains only on side of usefulness of exercise.
Thirdly think positively use full for health. As Turkish proverb says” the body will not be ill without mental illness”. I really believe this proverb and use it. Our brain can do anything what we command and does what we think. If we think negative thinks brain does it, if we think positively brain does good thinks for us. We know that success full people always contemplate positively. When they wake up they stand front of mirror and says themselves “I’m success full person, I can do it”. Furthermore they became a success full .That is a key of success full people. In my perspective, We can use this a key for our health .Thinking that we are healthy. It really works. At once I was ill ,I never thought that I will dye or I’ m ill, I said myself that I’m not ill anymore and did not use any medicine. A few days later I was good. Positive thinking helped to me not medicine.
Finally, as I said above we can do a lot thinks to stay healthy. In the other hand ,we know that everyone cannot handle with all thinks for good health. However we can do a few of them. As I wrote above the essential habits for good health are :drink water, exercise and positive thinking. I do these and really works for me, I believe it works for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 99.0 43.0788530466 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2840.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 631.0 407.700716846 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50079239303 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01195704033 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54638775652 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45324881141 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.6003584229 223% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2800028227 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7391304348 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7173913043 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232669530977 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670718748799 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636955414789 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159282819801 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813408859082 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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