Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

I totally agree with the statement “People are never satisfied with what they; they always want something more or something different”. As we can see from the famous idiom “Human needs are endless” or theory like “Maslow hierarchy of need”. These can answer the question clearly. I will elaborate more about the topic throughout the following paragraphs.

First of all, the needs of human vary depending on their ages. As the babies, they just have the basic need like food. They can actually live without clothes. When they grow up, as kids, they have to go to school and to be the part of the society. So, they begin to need more and to be like others. For example, when kids see their friends have cool toys they want that toys and ask their parents to buy for them. Moreover, as the teenagers, people tend to follow the trend and are into fashion. Especially girls, they usually change clothes and buy new ones almost every week. Sometime they forget they bought the clothes and never wear them. Furthermore, as the adults, people require more and more to fulfill themselves and can’t stop seeking for the better things for themselves. For instance, the current US president, Donald Trump, he is the billionaire before he gets elected. Many people may think that he can live and do nothing till he dies. Yes, he can do that but as mentioned before “Human needs are endless”. He has money but he still wants to have power.

In addition to human need during growing up period, there is a strange case for people who are religious. For this characteristic, people are likely to abandon the outside world and only focus on religion and their god. If we look on the surface, we will think that these people satisfy what they have and what they are doing but if we investigate deeply, we will realize that they are not happy in their life and are finding the way out. They go to the temple, church or mosque to pray meditating and being with themselves to find out what they really need in their life. Even the monk or priest, they found that their former life in the outside world couldn’t answer their meaning of life. Therefore, they follow the god way.

From the aforementioned above, it can be said that people are always finding the better things and never satisfied with what they have. Some only want the basic need. Some want more. Some want more and more. All in all, everyone always wants something.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly want the basic need. Some want more. Some want more and more. All in all, everyon...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n all, everyone always wants something.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76223776224 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49640446503 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505827505828 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.466246251 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4482758621 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7931034483 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89655172414 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349890092192 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990328461694 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104319175197 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239186510852 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440466362452 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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