Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
Nowadays, we could see a huge food wasted at every corner on streets or waste bins. There are some causes making this problem, and of course, I will propose some solutions to diminish it.
To begin with, I will list some reasons that lead to this issue. Firstly, people have a higher living standard; therefore, they pay less attention to food demand, as it does not seem to be the vital thing of the life. As a result, people buy much more food than they eat, prepare meal more than before; and at the end, people leave so much food on the table. Secondly, many food plants are producing many kind of food with a limitation of using day; this is a typical food waste at almost supermarkets. Take vegetable and fruits as example, these kinds of food have a short using day before it is expired and thrown to the recycle bin.
To tackle these problems of food waste as I mentioned above, some actions people could do from now on. Firstly, from government side, they should execute a food campaign on their citizens, this enables people have more awareness about food status, and choose food responsibly. Secondly, food manufacturers should provide a suitable quantity of food to the market in order to the market itself consume all of food distribution. Finally, each person of us should share the food responsible consumption to diminish the food waste.
To conclusion, the food security become seriously due to food waste. By pointing out the reason why people waste food, and submitting solutions to stop these issues, the future of humanity will be preserved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...econdly, many food plants are producing many kind of food with a limitation of using day;...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75735294118 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48298709491 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.143046608 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231479832703 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907892117593 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424427965976 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152282829915 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308243225761 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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