Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Government plays a vital role in the development of any nation. Everyone pay tax to the government, federal as well as state tax and in return the government facilitates us. This money is used in the form of roads, street lights, constructions, parks, public restrooms and much more. Metropolitan city is a place which expands the enormous amount of living, roads, government workstations etc. However, in my opinion, big cities need huge financial buttress for the construction of buildings, improving the parks and burnish roads etc.
New york is the busiest city in the US, it is the hub of a stock market. However, all the financial jobs are there. Manhattan is the headquarter of all major financial corporates and hence our economy grows. If metropolitan cities receive financial support from the government then these cities grow and make up the level. Therefore, this will directly effect on a country economy. The government should facilitate them by providing terrific infrastructure for workstations, roads, parks etc. Several employees work, meet and celebrate festivals together. However, our tradition generated and preserved.
There are many universities, fitness centre, picnic spots and much more than rural areas. If we have enormous amount of people, obviously competition among these people become more. if they are happy with public services then performance is improved in their workstations, that will directly effect on the growth of economy.In contrary, they need more government financial buttress.
In we flip the other side of the coin, the small cities also need financial buttress to grow. So that ,the students should not go to big cities for higher studies, because of that, he saves money which they spent for living, traveling. Instead of this, many national and international students come in small cities. If government support them, the universities organize cultural programs, hence our tra
ditions preserve. In another case, farmers will also get many benefits by financial support from the government.
In the nutshell, the government should provide financial support to big cities, so they grow our economy, hence effect on the development of the country. The culture and traditions are also preserved by these people. In contrast, small cities also need financial support for the growth of universities, farming. So in my point of view, government provide financial support to major cities as well rural areas. The government gives support, according to their land they consumed, in both major and minor cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37717121588 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84712395391 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521091811414 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.166252944 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3461538462 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291301665887 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784379090424 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614367258071 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149697162107 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751628583192 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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