In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?
In the recent days, we can notice that the involvement of youngsters in crime has increased considerably. Due to this, a section of our society conceives that those teenagers should be tried as adults. However, in my opinion the way we handle juvenile and adults in crime should be different. This essay will discuss two paramount reasons supporting this view.
First and foremost, a crime is committed only when there a criminal act along with a criminal intent occurs. But, youngsters neither have a vivid intent for their actions nor a clear understanding of the consequences of their doings. Furthermore, many adolescents lack the cognitive ability to plan and execute a harmful activity. Consequently, most of the incidents are due to peer pressure and impulsive reaction rather than a planned lawbreaking. Hence, it is inappropriate to try a teenager in court as an adult.
In conjunction with the above justification, youth have more room for rehabilitation compared to grown-ups. Since it is likely that they don’t comprehend the aftermath of their conduct, they stand a higher chance in realizing their wrongdoing and mend their ways. Additionally, apprehending them along with adults, will not only turn them into hardened criminals, but also does not achieve the goal of abating crime in the society. For these reasons, the trial and punishment for juvenile and adult should be separate.
In a nutshell, since, the comprehension of a teenager is lower than an adult and, as they are more probable to rectify their blunders; the sentence imposed on them should also vary accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02957697341 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8488892038 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140557692229 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472015272045 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460687212869 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841576331598 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318560712761 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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