Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that it is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
It is undisputable that the number of crimes in cities is greater compared to villages in majority of the nations in the world. So many researches have been conducted to analyze this aspect. Likewise, this essay also will discuss on this issue along with the solutions to handle this problem.
To a greater extent, the anti-social activities are committed by immigrants from rural areas, who unfortunately suffer from poverty. This is because, when the city becomes over-populated, it is unable to provide sufficient employment opportunities and this Result in improper supply and demand scenario. Consequently, the section of population below poverty line inflates and the destitute are effortlessly lured into criminal activities. Another cause for ascending crime downtown is the increase in drugs and alcohol usage than in villages. For instance, alcohol has become a social norm in cities and eventually many social drinkers gradually deteriorate to alcoholism. Eventually, when people get addicted to drug abuse, they become psychologically weak and hence, they become an easy target for anti-social elements.
To curtail the above mentioned issues, authorities should analyze the reason for the mass movement from villages to cities and fill the gap accordingly. For instance, decline of income generated through agriculture is a key cause for the migration. Hence, we have to discover ways to restore farming to its older glory. This can be accomplished by educating farmers to utilize modern techniques in agriculture. Therefore, they can achieve a financially stable situation through agriculture as well. Moreover, there should be more awareness created among people regarding the harm caused by drugs and liquor. For example, Non-governmental organizations and the government should go hand in hand and conduct awareness programs. Moreover, rehabilitation should be provided to addicts, so that we can curtail a major cause for the growth of crime.
Concisely, controlling the population in cities by providing better employment opportunities in villages and regulating substance addiction will assist us in bringing down the crime in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, hence, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61890243902 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12156860984 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3104087836 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940345747563 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307226920754 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395425628703 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606557605845 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253111649775 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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