Some people may hold the view that prohibiting smoking in public places breaks there freedom. some others, nonetheless, may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that not only does smoking not limit people, but also can cause many problems for them. In my opinion, I postulate that it is the good idea to forbid people from smoking in public places. In following paragraphs, some conspicuous reasons will cogently substantiate my standpoint.
The first aspect to point out is that smoking in places where there are many people, can endanger other people’s health as much as that of the smoking person.my uncle is a very tangible example to illustrate this argument. suffering from a heart attack, he found that the main reason of his disease is living in the vicinity of a smoking person who does not care about other people’s health and smokes occasionally. Although my uncle has never smoked, he endures a disease which smoking is it’s cause.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that the more places that people are allowed to smoke, the more acceptable behavior would be smoking. In fact, frequently seeing people who smoke, individuals think that smoking is not that bad. Consequently, the number of smoking persons will increase in community which can cause detrimental consequence.the best example that fits this notion is my younger brother. He began to smoke when he saw that my father and my older brother smoke everywhere and every time. In fact, he overlooked the badness of cigarette when he saw smoking scene over and over. therefore, it goes without saying that allowing people to smoke in public places will encourage people to smoke and promote the culture of smoking.
To sum up, by taking all the aforementioned arguments into consideration, we can draw the conclusion that smoking in public places can cause harmful effects on both smoking persons and other people of community, such as threatening their health and stopping paying attention to damagin effects of cigarette.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, look, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17771084337 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77978433922 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1942664023 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219345071496 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935314269454 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491617714697 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138834324692 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426547227367 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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