Dear Hannah,
I hope this letter finds you and your family fine. I tried to write you earlier but unfortunately, I couldn't. Let me elaborate on more what happened to me after that holiday.
Actually, as l arrived home, I received an email from my tutor about changing the deadline of my project. You see how much hard it was for me to do all affairs, which I had planned to do in 2 month, through 2 weeks. Finally, I was able to hand in my project yesterday, and guess what? Arriving home and receiving photos that you kindly sent to me. Honestly. It was the most fantastic present I've ever gotten. You can't imagine how much these photos are precious for me. I couldn't stop thinking about that memorable holiday and your kindness hospitality.
Next month, we are going to push the boat out for my husband's birthday, I want to invite you and your family to pay a visit to us that time. We will be more than happy if you plan to participate in our party.
Hope to see you soon,
Elahe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Hannah, I hope this letter finds you and your fa...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... write you earlier but unfortunately, I couldnt. Let me elaborate on more what happened...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...affairs, which I had planned to do in 2 month, through 2 weeks. Finally, I was able t...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...stly. It was the most fantastic present Ive ever gotten. You cant imagine how much ...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... fantastic present Ive ever gotten. You cant imagine how much these photos are preci...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...uch these photos are precious for me. I couldnt stop thinking about that memorable holi...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te in our party. Hope to see you soon, Elahe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, honestly, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35135135135 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41819255288 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8930756396 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9230769231 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301222652117 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10384912837 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681153589364 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183210964874 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040257346275 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.