Humankind seeks for travel to variety of new places, while some of the people prefer to travel to their own country than other countries in differenet continent. In my opinion, I believe that traveling in our own country has advantageous. So, I feel this way for two main reasons.
First, having a trip to our own country can help us to to become familiar with a lot of delicious food which belongs to specific regions, especially, the rural part because of the organic vegetables which grew in mountains part. As for me, I have lived in the spacious country that has interesting landscapes in the north part. During the winter season, I had visited the rural part of my country and had a meal which I had not ever tasted. Also, some of the foods had been made from organic vegetables and fresh meat becuase of that they had a unique lifestyle to having a healthy body.
Second, people who lived in my country has a variety of accents which is one thing that we can know by communicating. As I said above, during my trip to the north part, I made some new friends in the rural region. They speak in differnet accent, which I could not understand some of the words becuase of different pronunciation. Also, they were friendly and communicative, I have been invited by one of the families that they lived in the wooden house.That was a great hospitality from the people that I had known them for short term.
In conclusion, traveling in our own country is the way to grasp new things such as tasting flavorful foods and learning new accent. I strongly believe that each person should visit her own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... travel to variety of new places, while some of the people prefer to travel to their own co...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...g a trip to our own country can help us to to become familiar with a lot of delicious...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...ng landscapes in the north part. During the winter season, I had visited the rural part of my cou...
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Line 4, column 448, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...meal which I had not ever tasted. Also, some of the foods had been made from organic vegeta...
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Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...et accent, which I could not understand some of the words becuase of different pronunciatio...
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Line 6, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...ies that they lived in the wooden house.That was a great hospitality from the people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, as for, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60266623442 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9315586708 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150027256509 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558232183104 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590297748465 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101804991443 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058552467773 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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