The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize.
Nowadays, the Internet's role in our life takes completely for guaranteed. The Internet has an inseparable connection with the communities. It is a wonderful tool that helps us to keep in touch anywhere in the world. It is possible to share memories and experiences with people who are far away.
We cannot ignore the internet strong influence on routine activities and lives. You consider the press communication all over the world that informs each other about everyday events immediately by one internet connection. Moreover, great deals of transactions are handled by internet access, such as speculation, foreign exchange, government dealing and etc.
When someone wants to book any flights (internal or external), it is so simple just by clicking one button of your keyboard through the internet. However, there are a large number of disadvantages. Some websites can become an obsession and encourage people to stay at home instead of going out to see their friends. In addition, for some people, time to time instant communication means that it would be difficult to escape from work. you also spend less time with your family and dears.
It is beneficial that whenever you travel far from your family and friends, you can keep in touch just by the internet. But, the bothering issue is that our connection has been only by the net. Usually, Most of us are mentally disturbed about checking our emails or social network pages, even at the family parties.
It might be interesting for most of the people to exchange their personal information through the internet, but in some cases, knowing your very personal information by others might bother you in the future. Generally, a great deal of data that is easy to reach would get from the internet rather than magazines or newspapers. So they would be unreliable and in most cases would be just gossips which are useless.
In conclusion, each tool in our world with high-tech is not fully beneficial. We can take the both advantages and disadvantages influent into consideration, and then decide better about the tools actually roles in our life.
Is the internet a positive or negative influence on our lives?
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2017-10-30 | milanree1527@yahoo.com | 86 | view |
- you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. 56
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own life. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens lead a good life. 73
- You live in a room in the college dormitory which you share with three other students. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to study 75
- The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are On the other hand it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize 61
- Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...n, foreign exchange, government dealing and etc. When someone wants to book any flights...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hrough the internet. However, there are a large number of disadvantages. Some websites can become...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...would be difficult to escape from work. you also spend less time with your family a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78636312143 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4870328901 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187785323988 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513960959981 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367670228098 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835372142914 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378190988043 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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