The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares on how many people visit Ashdown Museum before the year and after the year when it was reconstructed. If we looking at the table, we can see that annual number of f visitors between two period rose by 18000, from 74000 to 92000.
The charts show information about people's satisfaction by results of survey in percent.
Overall, what stands out from these pie charts, proportion of people who had satisfaction increased, while percentage of dissatisfied visitors became less which illustrate us that this refurbishment became better than last repair. Another interesting point is that proportion of non-respondents did not alter.
To begin with, proportion of visitors who had extremely satisfaction and just satisfaction grew by 20% and 10% respectively, to 35% and 40%, in turn.
However, percentage of attendants who were very dissatisfied decreased by 25%, to 15%. Then, proportion of very dissatisfied people halved from 10% to 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30921052632 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12143841363 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690789473684 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6976797748 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200262989466 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827255871656 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993293113261 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105236961158 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950826569954 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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