When famous people give their opinion, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that celebrities are the epitome of success for many thanks to the publicity they receive from social media and are, more often than not, imitated by those who have an insatiable desire for fame. Although they are widely adored by all people, not all people are influenced by them equally. In the following paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, for many people they serve as an arbiters taste, morality and public opinion. When different kinds of disorders like short term relationships, drugs or alcohol are leading celebrities, mature people would think that this life is not ideal but fans of this stars especially teenagers disagree. Generally phrased, some teens are more likely to listen to the word of their favorite celebrities than their own parents. For instance, many well-known people do not make a secret of alcohol or drugs abuse and this can provide fertile ground for youth to mimic immoral behaviors. To elucidate more on this issue, these behaviors by celebrities could have deleterious effects on the people's life especially children owing to the fact that glamorization of dying due to the overdose in the media might make young people feel that using those substances are acceptable.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that celebrities have negative impact not only on the look and personality but also on their health. To put it in other word, sometimes they present on screens or glamorized advertise with smoking in the media or magazines in an inappropriate way. In fact, it can be an example for supporters everywhere that it is acceptable to smoke. Going into the depth, destructive habit by well-known people not only can destroy mental and physical health but also can contribute to low self-esteem. Indeed, individuals especially youth need to increase their confident and view life differently in order to reach pinnacle of their life.
Thirdly, celebrities are not enough experienced or taught people to make suggestions for others. Indeed, people all around the globe need to be advised by knowledgeable people, which can contribute greatly to the progress of them. As a corollary, not only can celebrities mislead people but also can prevent them from making progress and reach success in their personal life.
In light of reason elaborated, I reiterate that in today's hectic world, celebrities could not be reliable and are not able to offer wise opinion owing to their immoral habits, which make them cussed. In fact listen to their ideas could have bring negative results in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...s could have deleterious effects on the peoples life especially children owing to the f...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... with smoking in the media or magazines in an inappropriate way. In fact, it can be an example for supp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13594470046 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71924644283 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536866359447 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2302978669 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208980284541 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640884048993 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422748503222 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109850424358 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642867153371 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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