Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life.
Childhood is a memorable time almost for everyone. Personally, I believe that childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life for several reasons.
Many people connect childhood with playing. Almost all kids are always happy to do anything. They can do everything they want. For instance, When I was a 5 years old, I spent almost of my time to play around with my friends for hours, such as playing sand, cooking leaves, and scrabbling. I did not think hardly and difficulty in facing my life time. I often played with my friends for hours without worrying the trouble that might be happen. Moreover, I was a naughty kid that looked like a boy who love climbing the tree and playing football. I did love doing that at that time.
Besides, I felt my childhood full of enjoyment. I was not stressful at all. I could do anything without thinking about the other business as the older people do, such as education, money, or even office. I provided my time as I wished to do. Fortunately, my parent supported my playing. They always bought me girl's games, like dolls and mini cooking-kitchen tools. Every time I usually figured out them as my friends by talking to them, either down or happy. What a beautiful life it was!
On the contrary, my childhood did not only give me the enjoyment, but also made me disappointed in one side. I remember of my kindergarten friend that made me felt so down. At that time, she got car accident when she went holiday with her family. Her parents were saved, but she left me forever. Hearing that news, I was so sad. It brought me several years to be stuck on her. I preferred to keep preventing myself from my friends who want to be closed to me. Facing that problem, I forced myself to move on. Fortunately, I become a little bit open to the others now.
To sum up, even though there is one thing that bothers my childhood, but I convince that childhood is the most excellent time ever of my life.
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