Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every human being on this universe has the right to live with preserved dignity and rights as wells as duties that he’ll have to maintain the process of life, the issue whether to be responsible to obey just laws and disobey unjust laws or whether he not remains contentious, while each side has its strengths and weaknesses points, I believe that every individual should be in charge of performing the right laws and disapprove the wrong and the unjust ones, for many reasons including the sake and the well-being of his nation, the equal opportunities for every human to maintain a prosperous and a well-organized environment for him and his family as well as a respectful life.
Laws are there for a reason, and any community should respect and obey such laws, but in my opinion when these laws are presented with no justice and with the neglection of the individual’s best interest, here it is the people’s responsibility to have an opinion about them, to take a stand and to disobey them. For instance, the deterioration of Egyptians situations during the last decade along with the increased prices ,the reduced salaries, constricted laws, decreased work opportunities and the lack of the simplest facilities in many aspects of life had led to their revolution in January 2011, when Egyptian people kept undergoing the unjust laws and the lack of the good life quality, they have decide to be enough with this miserable condition and to protest in the square of freedom at Cairo, they remained their day and night protesting against their government until their previous president Husney Mubark announced the withdrawal from his position as Egypt president, so that they can elect another president with new government that will provide a better life conditions and just laws which they were looking for.
On the other hand, some may argue that the laws should be followed regardless whether they are right or wrong, fair or unjust and it is not the person’s responsibility to change or to not follow them, this is for many reasons including that there are people who are already responsible for such things and since it is law, it is always right and should be obeyed, but this point is flawed since it doesn’t represent the person’s best interest and since it won’t give them the freedom to protest for themselves. For example, there has been a huge problem with Iraq’s budget during the last years and the government has decided to decrease the salaries of the people in a certain percentage in the year 2016, besides this decision there were some laws regarding increasing fuel prices and also medications prices, Iraqis obeyed these laws because they believed that these laws were for the country’s best interests and they should obey their government, as a result of this, the country’s situation remained unstable, the decrease in the salaries and the prices increments led to increase crimes of kidnapping and robbery and searching for other methods for money gaining.
In conclusion, I believe that the individuals are responsible for obeying the just laws beside protesting against the unjust laws due to many reasons include the best interest of the nation, the equal opportunities of human beings to have a prosperous uncomplicated living environment and a respectful life so that they can move on and give their best to their community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s family as well as a respectful life. Laws are there for a reason, and any com...
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...st laws which they were looking for. On the other hand, some may argue that t...
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...for other methods for money gaining. In conclusion, I believe that the indivi...
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...nd give their best to their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2856.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 563.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07282415631 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8633439678 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463587921847 0.4932671777 94% => OK
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 93.0 23.0359550562 404% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 176.857208567 60.3974514979 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 476.0 118.986275619 400% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.8333333333 23.4991977007 399% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 5.21951772744 517% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169184656251 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104551123048 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356270769473 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124947705785 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273617255735 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.4 14.1392134831 349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 48.8420337079 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 12.1743820225 325% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.38706741573 140% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 11.2143820225 350% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 11.7820224719 340% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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