Pets should be treated as family memebers. Give your opinion.
Personally, I agree that pets should be treated as family memebers. Keeping pets symbolizez a lot about the person and his background. The meaning of the word pet is meaning to rare or to grow someone; which means that you need to treat them well and include them in your family and make thm a part of your daily schedule.
To begin with pets are also living things. Like human beings they aslo have emotions and feelings and hence they should be treated well. They have the right to eat food regularly as much as any of the other family member would have. For example I treat my pet dog as a part of my family and feed him at regular intervals. If he does not eat food for some reason I feel sad and depressed.
In addition, since they stay in the same house they ought to be treated as family members. This is because just as we don't traet our relatives and family memebers as strangers we cannot treat them also as one. The fact that we have got them home only signifies that they should be treated well. Otherwise we would'nt have adopted them as pets in the first place. One should make a conscious effort to take them for regualr checkups as one would have taken their child would. Just as communication is very important for the health of the family, communication wit the pet is also very important. Although they cannot talk like humans we should try to understand what they want to tell us and what emtions they wish to convey.
Finally, I also feel that keeping pets in the house is the same as raising babies. Nowadays, a lot of people keep pets at home to know whether they are fit to start a family and have babies. Good treatment to the pets is an indicator that they will make good parents to their kids.
To sum up, these factors lead me to believe that pets should be treated as family members. Keeping pets just for the sake of it does not serve any purpose. If you decide to keep a pet, one should realize that it is as good as adopting a baby and hence just as one would traet one's own baby with all the love and affection pets should also be given the same love, care and affection.
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