Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why is this the case? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?
It is known that ciclying brings benefits for people's health as well as for the environment; however, there are some low marks when comes to riding a bike in certain cases that make people dislike using it as a main transport.
On one hand, travelling on a bicycle is not as faster as using a car or public buses, and when people live far away from the city or their workplaces, they prefer to take some other types of transportation that could ensure them to get on time everywhere they may need to go. Furthermore, people could not travel as a family if they want to go to do some entertainment activities such going to the mall or visiting new towns, because there are not bicyles with the enough sits for the whole members of the family; besides, they do not have room to take bags or any additional items people may want to take with them or buy perhaps.
On the other hand, there are some countries where transportation on bicycles are adopted as a culture, which could be a good ida for every one to implement. Therefore educational campaigns should be developed in order to let people know about all the benefits they would access to by riding a bike. Also, governments should build an organised and complete routes to enable people to get to all the places where they are usually taken by the buses, cars, taxis and other transports. Moreover, their prices should be reasonable, not too expensive to make sure people with even the lowest incomes could buy a bicycle.
To conclude, the use of bicycles as main transport is not probably going to happen right now, but with the governments help this could be a goal for every country to achieve on a near future, by building bicycle's routes and fostering a new environmental-friendly culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main transport'.
Suggestion: main transport
...es that make people dislike using it as a main transport. On one hand, travelling on a bicycl...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ravelling on a bicycle is not as faster as using a car or public buses, and when p...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a good ida for every one to implement. Therefore educational campaigns should be develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65273311897 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73696721706 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6134328774 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.875 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.875 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.875 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217002072107 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990545714857 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601188458165 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149227622012 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429190641709 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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